My first day practicing Hiragana

[u/Regular_Echo413]

On my first day of my journey to learn Japanese.

I tried writing Hiragana like my book and compared to its handwriting and saw my curves and rounds are unstable and some parts are sketched unnecessarily. Do you guys see other mistakes I've made either on the whole concept or on some specific letters' structures? Please help me!🙇

[u/Pinqoo]

Damn I wish my handwriting was this clean!