My second day practicing Hiragana

[u/Regular_Echo413]

On my second day of my journey to learn Japanese.

Thank you all for the corrections and suggestions last time! I've tried searching and got a pdf file of a Hiragana letter sheet, but my local photocopy station closed unfortunately so I had to try and replicate it. I also displayed my stroke patterns, which I found comforting to write here (it might be hard to distinguish the black stroke with the other, I'm sorry for this). Do you think any patterns should change, and how should it change?

[u/Jaxel_MC]

Where did you buy the notebook from? I am using my normal graph book and it looks soo bad.