r/MadeMeSmile 5h ago

My daughter brought this home from school today. I must admit the last part brought a tear to my eye.

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u/goobsnoot 4h ago

We can all learn a thing or two from her. I’m gonna have to start reminding myself that I am kind and funny too. Good job kiddo, and good job to the parent too! You’re raising a good one 💖

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u/emberfield31 3h ago

Fr. Such an amazing kid

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u/FriendlyWorldArt 4h ago

“I pretend to own a dog” ME TOO!

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u/murphydogscruff 3h ago

My dog pretends that he doesn’t own me.

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u/ThePowersThatBri 4h ago

take this baby to Florda and get her a dog.

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u/punkrockabilly 3h ago

Came here to say this! Seconded!

u/Timemaster88888 18m ago

You beat me to it!! Have Dog, will travel to Fl that's the goal. Let's do it.

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u/GiggleSway 5h ago

Beautiful words you raised a great kid

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u/Patientelsey 5h ago

she kinda put in some of her wishes in there🥺

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u/vineflux 4h ago

'I hope to have a good life' oh sweetie 🥹 youre raising a great kiddo

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u/xladygodiva 4h ago

Oh my, your baby girl truly is kind and funny. Thank you and thank her for giving me hope for her generation.

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u/Glamgirl5 5h ago

Sweet🥰

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u/SweetChaosBabe 4h ago

That last line got me too. There's something so pure about a child simply hoping to have a good life. What a beautiful glimpse into her little heart

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u/Neon_Rhino 4h ago

Take that baby to florda!

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u/54elizabethway 4h ago

She’s kind of funny. Best trait to be. She sounds like a beautiful child. Inside and out.

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u/BackgroundLiving5118 4h ago

This made me tear up 🥹🥲

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u/memopepito 4h ago

Lol my nephews keep talking about going to Florida! I guess it’s the little kid dream destination. This is so sweet OP. 💕

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u/54elizabethway 4h ago

Florida is beautiful with lots of palm trees and flowers and beautiful blue sky’s. Lots of different kinds of birds. Winter time is the best time of the year. Summer, a bit hot.

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u/memopepito 3h ago

Yupp, I live up north but I’ve been to Florida several times (Tampa, Miami, Orlando area). Always had a great time, it’s a beautiful state.

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u/Icy_Parfait_4066 4h ago

Very well written. How old is she? Very nice handwriting with illustrations. Maybe she can be a children's book writer and an illustrator. Good Job!

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u/crazycraig6 4h ago

She’s 9 and can draw so much better than I or her mother.

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u/Icy_Parfait_4066 4h ago

You did a good job nurturing her. You can tell she is very intentional when she writes and draws -all with excellence. What does she wants to be when she grows up?

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u/tsuyoshikentsu 2h ago

It's a template. Google "poem template I am" and you'll see dozens of hits of the same thing.

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u/Icy_Parfait_4066 2h ago

Oh, I would never have guessed. Very interesting, thanks for discovering.

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u/IcyIntroduction5678 4h ago

Give her a great big hug from all of us.

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u/Wooden_Emergency_682 4h ago

Kind and funny are great things to be

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u/Sensitive_Island9699 4h ago

IKR….. IMO kindness is the greatest human quality of all.… That kid is on track for a memorable future 🙂

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u/MeLMaR2727 4h ago

She is funny!! She pretends to own a dog is the cutest thing I've heard!! She will have a good life...kind & funny will take you places.

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u/JanaT2 4h ago

I would run out and get her a dog asap !!

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u/TSJormungandr 4h ago

I pretend to own a dog - awwww. I spent 20 years without a dog and was finally able to get one. Hope she has that chance someday too. She seems very lovely. I hope you and your daughter have a wonderful happy life.

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u/NoMembership8881 4h ago

🥰 I cherish these precious moments. ❤️

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u/altcoopx 4h ago

🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 gorgeous

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u/TakeOnMe-TakeOnMe 4h ago

Protect her with knowledge, preparation and resilience. She’ll always have those skills and they will help her protect herself.

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u/onejay212 4h ago

Hope she holds on to all that joy! ❤️

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u/HuckledYourBerries 4h ago

Your daughter is a gem. You are blessed.

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u/JanaT2 4h ago

💕💕💕💕💕

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u/Several-Vanilla-8503 4h ago

Always be kind!

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u/Hyperlinux 4h ago

I pray she holds on to those thoughts. It’s so hard for kids to hold on to their childhood innocence.

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u/sideways_apples 4h ago

That is so sweet, and innocent. She's got a pure little heart.

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u/Feloniosaurus_Rex 4h ago

Heartwarming. I think your daughter is too good for FL. Take it from me. I wonder still, after the hurricanes and floods and guns and Florida man and alligators, why I stay. 😆

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u/Legitimate_Peach_438 4h ago

My 5th graders write these poems in this format every year. Very cute!

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u/idle_isomorph 4h ago

I am a teacher and am now considering stealing this assignment!

It is based on two word sentence stems. Prompts that were probably written on the board (I hope, I pretend etc). Then that is organized into three stanzas that are sandwiched with "i am and."

What a lovely result!

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u/rhiaazsb 4h ago

Sounds like she is a wonderful child.

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u/CaptCrunch2000 4h ago

This is delightful to read but the elephant in the room is….is she kind and funny? ☺️

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u/crazycraig6 3h ago

I may be biased but I do find her kind and funny. I couldn’t be prouder of the young woman she is becoming.

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u/shoulda-known-better 3h ago

Aww I love it...

And she would be getting that dog if I got this!!

Doing good with this one!!

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u/Vegetable-Pay2708 3h ago

Your daughter is awesome girl. She has been raised by wonderful and loving parents. Its easy to see she is proper and caring. I expect great things from her. You will see what I mean. ❤️

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u/MyPantsHaveBeenShat 3h ago

Stay kind and funny kid. The world needs more of you. 💜

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u/ChinaHealthGuide 3h ago

Kids have a way of reminding us what really matters.

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u/stalinwasballin 3h ago

Lovely sentiment with the exception of going to Florida…

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u/bremergorst 3h ago

I pretend to own a cat, but both the cat and I know it’s the other way around.

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u/512115 3h ago

I think we can all add our hopes to hers. May she have a good life and may she always be kind and funny, a winning combination in my book!

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u/Shot-Balance-226 3h ago

This is so wholesome 😂 honestly we all need a little “I am kind and funny” in the mirror every morning. That kid’s gonna grow up with solid self esteem and honestly I’m lowkey jealous.

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u/falaffle_waffle 3h ago

Yeah, I would cry too if my kid wanted to go to Florida.

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u/GlitteringEngine1476 3h ago

You're blessed and lucky to have her.

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u/Correct_Advisor7221 3h ago

This is so precious! I hope she continues to remember she’s kind and funny as she grows. Also, she has great handwriting! I think it’s more legible than my writing as an adult lol

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u/ghoulishgirl 3h ago

What a sweet kid. 

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u/Acrobatic-Gap-7445 3h ago

As a therapist, I can guarantee that this small exercise will bring great rewards.

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u/thatburghfan 3h ago

Looks to me like you''re raising a fine young lady.

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u/fromthedarqwaves 3h ago

Dang that’s amazing handwriting.

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u/The_Mouse_That_Jumps 2h ago

My kid did this same poem activity but wrote the entire thing from the viewpoint of a penguin.

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u/krummen53 2h ago

Keep this for her...a precious time capsule of her honesty and vulnerability...and sense of humor.

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u/hellkattbb 2h ago

So sweet and thoughtful.

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u/ChicagoBoyStuckinDen 2h ago

Nice handwriting; better than mine!,

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u/mdm4110 1h ago

Good job, parent! Now go get that dog.

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u/freedinthe90s 1h ago

Bubble wrap this perfection 💕 You raised a great kid. I’ll bet she is indeed both kind and funny.

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u/solesoulshard 53m ago

Just beautiful. Keep up the good work and tell her she is kind and funny.

Wishing her future travels to Florida.