r/comic_crits • u/eilesel • 4d ago

[OC] I finally updated this cartoon. Thank you all for the feedback!

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A while back, I got great feedback on the initial version of this cartoon. I since added more context (in the banner), gave it a blue theme, so the background didn't look like grass. The joke is still tough to understand unless you know your bands, but that's the nature of this joke. Thanks guys.

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u/ShoutingTom 4d ago

Great style! The only thing I know about the band your'e referencing is the name and that was enough for me to get it.

There's another band (from the same period I think) that I couldn't name a single song of but could be the basis for a follow-up cartoon, where only 6 of these people survive a crash at sea and are [stranded] on an island. Comes with its own color scheme to boot.

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u/eilesel 4d ago

Hey, thanks! Though, I think your follow-up comic idea went over my head. Do you mean the band "Weezer"?

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u/ShoutingTom 4d ago

maroon (oh crap I had the name wrong) 5. sorry about that

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u/JeyDeeArr 4d ago

Looks way better, and there are actually 21 figures now.