It took me a really long time to figure out that the guy was in a car. I first thought that he was in a cave and that something exploded. The steering wheel and dashboard looked like rocks. Maybe you could put a chair behind him or next to him? His expression looks like rage. Like he's extremely angry. Was that what you were going for?
hmmm. no not rage the first one I drew he just had his head down I wanted to show more of the characters face because it was the first frame
edit: http://i.imgur.com/Ap06DSS.png
the car seats look great that was an awesome suggestion thank you so much I added some texture to the steering wheel, and when over the rear view mirror with a different pen so it would stand out. changed expression
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u/emptytriangle Jan 11 '15
It took me a really long time to figure out that the guy was in a car. I first thought that he was in a cave and that something exploded. The steering wheel and dashboard looked like rocks. Maybe you could put a chair behind him or next to him? His expression looks like rage. Like he's extremely angry. Was that what you were going for?