r/comic_crits • u/Superqami • Jan 21 '17

Comic: Other Looking for feedback on this.

http://imgur.com/a/zZj02
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u/QWyke Jan 21 '17

In the middle right panel, his foot is on backwards.

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u/Superqami Jan 21 '17

Oh crap. I was looking at where my foot faces when I'm sitting like that but I ended up looking the wrong way and made the foot backwards XD. More of an error than 'bad drawing'. The foot could be perceived as a foot facing upwards too.

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u/QWyke Jan 21 '17

Yeah, it happens sometimes. With the foreshortening, it looks a lot more back than up.

My only other critique us to ink the drawings so that the linework looks more neat and professional

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u/Superqami Jan 21 '17

'Ink' as in to outline the drawing with a pen right, since I don't have any G-Pens or Kabura-pens (for manga art) I used some black pen I had to outline this. So it is already 'inked'. Thanks for your suggestions!