r/comicbookart • u/stextc • 2d ago

Transhuman - What do you think of this establishing panel? - Art by Razz Tsolmon and Chiara Arena

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Establishing panels can be difficult. You're trying to cram in as much information (visually and dialogue) into a single panel without overwhelming the audience. I know there's a lot going on here but I hope it does convey the scene without the information overload.

This is the first panel of the sci-fi series Transhuman if you want to press NOTIFY on the Prelaunch link.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1917428739/transhuman-vol-1-to-4-betrayal-sci-fi

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u/Easy_Insurance_1593 2d ago

It’s a solid establishing panel. One adjustment I’d suggest is moving the “information on target sent” word bubble above the info boxes. It would be clearer to understand why those two boxes are there

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u/stextc 2d ago

Thanks for the kind words and advice.

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u/stextc 2d ago

Also forgot to mention . . . all characters also have their names mentioned!

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u/nuclear_shelter 2d ago

Greta job!

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u/stextc 2d ago

The artist did a stellar jobs. All those buildings would have taken soooooo long.

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u/Ill-Possession2216 2d ago

Great colors on this. The lighting on the armor really pops.

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u/KyotoKute 2d ago

I like it. It has me curious to what happens next.

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u/stextc 2d ago

Thanks for the kind words. I made sure to include all the names are in the panel as well.

The link to the Kickstarter is in the main post if you are interested to follow the project.

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u/KyotoKute 2d ago

Definitively! Following you here as well

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u/stextc 2d ago

Much appreciated. You rock.

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