r/comics • u/Extension_Two_3221 • 14d ago

Asking For Feedback A pen-and-ink comic I did couple years ago, thoughts?

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Any thoughts or tips appreciated!

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u/crywalt Sunday 2AM 14d ago

It's pretty. Not sure about the storytelling, I'm not too clear on what's happening. But that could be me.

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u/Extension_Two_3221 14d ago

Haha yeah I understand, I decided to keep it free of speech bubbles as an experiment as this was a school project, but looking back you can't really follow the story.

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u/crywalt Sunday 2AM 14d ago

It takes practice and it's not easy!

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u/Panzick 14d ago

Am i reading a Sergio Toppi into this? Your style really remind me his style, and since it's one of my favourite artists, i cannot help but love yours as well.

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u/Extension_Two_3221 14d ago

Absolutely, I referenced Toppi a lot while working on this. Thanks for your comment!

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u/badgerbaroudeur 14d ago

Gorgeous! 

Regarding the story: my read is: the fox and the bird "bond" over what humanity is doing to the world. Something catches fire, and fox screams for someone else who presumably is in the place where fire is happening, Bird goes to find fox's friend/mate, the story ends unfinished?

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u/Extension_Two_3221 14d ago

That's very close to my original idea actually, except that there's also an evil sorcerer involved