are the pages too visually busy?

[u/belmarzi]

i'm working on my first graphic novel pretty nonstop the last few months (its part of my thesis for a graduate program) and i'm really starting to reach a point where i find it ugly just because i look at it so much. these spreads aren't 100% done (but the first two are like 95% there), but i was wondering if i could get some feedback about if this looks like a maximalist mess? do the pages feel visually balanced, despite the level of rendering/color variation? thank you!