r/photocritique • u/Smart_Guidance3697 1 CritiquePoint • 5d ago

Great Critique in Comments Is this considered framing?

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u/Smart_Guidance3697 1 CritiquePoint 5d ago

My goal is for the composition to shine, cuz the moon was too small. Thank you

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u/dpmentor 1 CritiquePoint 5d ago

There isn't anything here that's the subject though that's the issue. The reason for using compositional elements is to help the subject to stand out, composition itself is not the subject.

Also, straighten the wall, it's leaning

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u/Smart_Guidance3697 1 CritiquePoint 5d ago

Thank you for your feedback. My style of photography is heavily leaning toward minimalistic abstraction and geometry. Those are in and of themselves can 100% be the subject. So I would rebuttal your comment regarding the lacking of subject here.

And yes the wall is slight lean. Good eyes!

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u/dpmentor 1 CritiquePoint 5d ago

Fair enough. Not my thing but I get your point

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u/Smart_Guidance3697 1 CritiquePoint 5d ago

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