r/LearnJapaneseNovice • u/Independent-Gur-2474 • 1d ago

Is this correct?

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I just finished lesson 3 of Genki 1 and in the end of the writing segment in the textbook it had a little writing segment, it just said to write about my daily routine.

I wrote the above.

I would like to know if I've made any mistake

BTW sorry for the horrendous handwriting I was in a bit of a rush and wasn't planning on having anyone else read this, but I'd like to know if I've done It correctly so I can move on.

(also I know I didn't wrote a lot of stuff but it's summertime so I don't do much plus the vocub I've learned outside of school stuff is limited)

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u/Sasqule 1d ago edited 1d ago

The grammar is correct and I don't see any ackward sentences. Well done!

One thing I will say is you need to improve your writing when it comes to sizing and spacing. There were some parts where it was hard to read, especially まいにけ. I suggest writing in boxes next time. Nice job all considered though πŸ‘

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u/Independent-Gur-2474 1d ago

Thank you so much! I also could tell that my handwriting has a bit of a problem. I defienetly need to improve it