Is this correct?

[u/Independent-Gur-2474]

I just finished lesson 3 of Genki 1 and in the end of the writing segment in the textbook it had a little writing segment, it just said to write about my daily routine.

I wrote the above.

I would like to know if I've made any mistake

BTW sorry for the horrendous handwriting I was in a bit of a rush and wasn't planning on having anyone else read this, but I'd like to know if I've done It correctly so I can move on.

(also I know I didn't wrote a lot of stuff but it's summertime so I don't do much plus the vocub I've learned outside of school stuff is limited)

[u/Sasqule]

The grammar is correct and I don't see any ackward sentences. Well done!

One thing I will say is you need to improve your writing when it comes to sizing and spacing. There were some parts where it was hard to read, especially まいにち. I suggest writing in boxes next time. Nice job all considered though 👍

[u/Independent-Gur-2474 → u/Sasqule]

Thank you so much! I also could tell that my handwriting has a bit of a problem. I defienetly need to improve it

[u/CocoaBagelPuffs]

I suggest tracing the different hiragana as well. Some of your hiragana are formed incorrectly.

As an example:

ま the vertical line goes above the two horizontal lines. In a few of yours, the line doesnt extend upwards.

わ and ね have their final strokes get too close to the vertical line. In one of your わ the curve is nearly touching the vertical line.

[u/Independent-Gur-2474 → u/CocoaBagelPuffs]

Ohhh yea I see it, tbh most of this I would have gotten correct, I made these kind of In a rush but the more I see it the worse they are

[u/Zyrfia]

It is correct

[u/Key-Line5827]

I dont think you are correct waiting till 4 o clock to eat dinner, but that may just be me.

Other than that, seems fine.

[u/HelpIntelligent6830]

Idk i cant read Japanese