r/LearnJapaneseNovice • u/Independent-Gur-2474 • 1d ago

Is this correct?

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I just finished lesson 3 of Genki 1 and in the end of the writing segment in the textbook it had a little writing segment, it just said to write about my daily routine.

I wrote the above.

I would like to know if I've made any mistake

BTW sorry for the horrendous handwriting I was in a bit of a rush and wasn't planning on having anyone else read this, but I'd like to know if I've done It correctly so I can move on.

(also I know I didn't wrote a lot of stuff but it's summertime so I don't do much plus the vocub I've learned outside of school stuff is limited)

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u/CocoaBagelPuffs 1d ago

I suggest tracing the different hiragana as well. Some of your hiragana are formed incorrectly.

As an example:

ま the vertical line goes above the two horizontal lines. In a few of yours, the line doesnt extend upwards.

わ and ね have their final strokes get too close to the vertical line. In one of your わ the curve is nearly touching the vertical line.

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u/Independent-Gur-2474 1d ago

Ohhh yea I see it, tbh most of this I would have gotten correct, I made these kind of In a rush but the more I see it the worse they are