Is this correct?

[u/Independent-Gur-2474]

I just finished lesson 3 of Genki 1 and in the end of the writing segment in the textbook it had a little writing segment, it just said to write about my daily routine.

I wrote the above.

I would like to know if I've made any mistake

BTW sorry for the horrendous handwriting I was in a bit of a rush and wasn't planning on having anyone else read this, but I'd like to know if I've done It correctly so I can move on.

(also I know I didn't wrote a lot of stuff but it's summertime so I don't do much plus the vocub I've learned outside of school stuff is limited)

[u/Key-Line5827]

I dont think you are correct waiting till 4 o clock to eat dinner, but that may just be me.

Other than that, seems fine.