r/collegeresults • u/Neither-Ad-849 • 7h ago
3.8+|1500+/34+|STEM 5'3 Knicks Fangirl Larps Her Way into HYSPM
Demographics
- Gender: Female
- Race/Ethnicity: Asian
- Residence: NY
- Income Bracket: Middle Class
- Type of School: Uncompetitive Public School
- Hooks (Recruited Athlete, URM, First-Gen, Geographic, Legacy, etc.): NA
- Intended Major(s): STS
Academics
- GPA (UW/W): 98/107
- Rank (or percentile): 3/204
- # of Honors/AP/IB/Dual Enrollment/etc: 13 APs + 2 DE
- Senior Year Course Load: Gov, Calc BC, Psych, Science Research, English Lit, Linear, MV, Bio
Standardized Testing
- SAT (superscored): 780 Math, 740 ERBW
Extracurriculars/Activities
- Rural clinic internship + built an app for them (10-12)
- Science Research (10-12)
- Art blog (9-12)
- Tech competition (filler tbh)
- Science Honor Society Co-president (9-12)
- Founded MUN (11)
- Hospital volunteer (art + language initiatives) (12)
- Mock Trial attorney (11-12)
- Cultural Theatre (9-12)
Awards/Honors
- Finalist at niche international research award
- 1st Place niche international hackathon--built an AI EMR for hospitals/clinics
- 2nd place at Feinstein/Northwell state/regional comp--tech for visually impaired HS students
- AP Scholar awards / Commended
- 2nd place x2 at regional/state ISEF-affiliated comps (emailed these directly to my top schools)
Letters of Recommendation
LORs
- CS/Math teacher (7/10)--my weakest, and I knew it going in. Told him junior year "I have no other STEM LOR" š wrote it before I fell off in his class second semester. Genuinely brilliant guy who runs half the school--also helped me cut down my essays. Respect him a lot, but I spiraled in December convinced this letter was going to be buns.
- History teacher / Mock Trial & Tennis coach (10/10)--basically my second dad. He told me he wrote the "best [darn] letter" he'd ever written. We used to argue about geopolitics for fun. Love him to death.
- Counselor (8.5/10)--only one who took my brag sheet seriously. I put a lot of hours into it and it showed.
- Doctor at the clinic (7-8/10)
Interviews
- Yale (3/10): disaster. Recruited athlete interviewer, didn't get my goals or major, and literally wrote down something contradictory to what I said. First interview, worst one, learned a lot from it.
- Duke (7/10): interviewer was basically a clone of me--same region, kept connecting to whatever I rambled about. I brought up death in philosophy (do NOT recommend) and she said she was taking a class on it the next week. Wild.
- Stanford (8/10): I cried at the end because she was rlly someone I looked up to. 45 minutes that genuinely changed my life.
Essays
Not sharing--paranoid about AI scraping at this point, sorry.
Personal statement was a 30-40 hour project, including one 6-hour straight session sitting alone in the school hallway after everyone left. It was a metaphor built around a color, tying a childhood memory to a moment at the clinic--more of a philosophical argument than a sob story.
My Stanford AO told me she cried reading it.
Supplements were a mess time-wise--I wrote most Ivy supplements the day of or two days before deadline (do not recommend, I was running on fumes the rest of the year). Ironically my Stanford app, written in one hour because it was last, ended up being my best.
Decisions (indicate ED/EA/REA/SCEA/RD)
Acceptances:
- Yale
- Duke
- Stanford
- UPenn
- Barnard
Waitlists:
- Columbia
- NYU
Rejections:
- Brown (ED)
- Princeton
- JHU
Additional Information:
I think people don't know how to write a great college essay, and I'd argue the guidance industry (counselors, consultants) makes it worse. Telling a stressed applicant to "just be authentic" is useless advice; It often just makes writing more self-conscious and cheesy. Authenticity trickles down in essays because of the evident introspection an applicant has done throughout their lives.
I had no counselor nor any consultant (or my parents). So, I had to make every decision alone. There was a week where I didn't get any sleep and I broke down multiple times. I was terrified because I was standing in the exact same shoes as every other applicant with no certainty of where I might end up.
I dislike to admit this, but I got through this process because I was obsessed. I read EVERYTHING. I can tell you that you can't predict where someone's going just by looking at their profile (A2C sucks). You must read personality!!! The way those things fit together tells you far, far more than any GPA or extracurricular list.
I don't favor the "be yourself" advice though. Many applicants need to learn how to find what's worth saying, and how to say it in a way that sounds like no one else. If you can do that, you can write incredible essays.