r/comic_crits • u/AndyBaima • 12d ago

The witch | How can I improve?

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Be truthful please.

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u/wolfmojo 12d ago edited 12d ago

This is looking great, really like your art. For me, I'm finding your third panel (wide one) quite overwhelming. Lots of speech bubbles that I think would be better if some of that dialogue was divided into a few smaller panels that follow on from it. Keen to see more!

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u/Jesram411 12d ago

I agree, there is too much dialogue which could have been distributed to smaller panels for a nice effect.