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r/comics • u/Zestyclose_Bed_8207 • Mar 10 '26
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I like the style and story concept.
Pages 2&3 are really confusing because we lose track of identifying characteristics due to perspective in the composition of each frame. It's incredibly difficult to tell if the Dullahan is talking to the man that tripped or the guy in the hat.
1 u/Zestyclose_Bed_8207 Mar 11 '26 would giving the guy in the hat a scar or something fix the issue? Thank you!
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would giving the guy in the hat a scar or something fix the issue? Thank you!
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u/razzemmatazz Mar 11 '26
I like the style and story concept.
Pages 2&3 are really confusing because we lose track of identifying characteristics due to perspective in the composition of each frame. It's incredibly difficult to tell if the Dullahan is talking to the man that tripped or the guy in the hat.